Summer vacation is coming. Suppose you are Xu Hui. Your friend Mike e-mailed you and asked you about your vacation plan. Write an e-mail to him and tell him about your plan and explain the reasons briefly(简单地). Your e-mail should include the following points:
1.徙步旅行;
2.阅读书籍。
注意:
1.词数60—80左右,开头语已写好(不计入总词数);
2.围绕所给要点适当发挥,使行文连贯。
Dear Mike,
I'm glad to receive your e-mail.______________
_________________________________________
Best Wishes.
Yours truly,
Xu Hui
Dear Mike,
I'm glad to receive your e-mail. And I am happy to share my summer vacation plan with you. My first plan is going hiking for about one week. The reason why I choose this activity is that I love this sport and it can give me a new impression of different places and different people. When I come back from my hiking, I will read some good books of great writers. Books are source of knowledge. And I have to grasp this chance to read more and get more. If you have any good suggestions, please tell me in your next e-mail.
Best wishes.
Yours truly,
Xu Hui
权威解读
这篇文章语法严谨,文风平和,逻辑思维强。作者运用充分的说明,逐步展现两方面
的原因,上下文衔接自然,过渡平稳,言之成理,水到渠成。其中The reason why Ichoose this activity is that I love this sport and it can give me a new impression of different places and different people. 之中包含了同位语从句和表语从句,是此文中最能体现作者语言运用技巧的句子,给文章增色不少。
好词佳句
1.share sth. with sb. 某人分享某事
2.go hiking 徒步旅行
3.grasp this chance 抓住这次机会
4.And I am happy to share my summer vacation plan with you. 能很高兴和你分享我的暑假计划。
点拨:开篇点题,表明要与Mike分享计划,为下文陈述做了很好的铺垫,表明了小作者较强的逻辑思维。
5.when I come back from my hiking, I will read some good books of great writers. 徒步旅行回来后,我将会读一些大作家的著作。
点拨:时间状语从句将整篇文章衔接地非常好,更加体现了小作者清晰的逻辑思维。
参考样文
Dear Mike,
I'm glad to receive your e-mail.
It's a pleasure to share my summer vacation plan with you. First, I'm going hiking in the mountains because I'd like to get close to nature and take exercise as well. Then I plan to read a few books. I love reading but I don't have much time when I'm at school. I think my vacation is going to be a colorful one.
Best wishes.
Yours truly,
Xu Hui