GMAT考试:2011年8月gmat作文机经AA(至8.14)(2)

No.39 The following appeared in an Avia Airlines departmental memorandum：

“On average， 9 out of every 1，000 passengers who traveled on Avia Airlines last year filed a complaint about our baggage-handling procedures. This means that although some 1 percent of our passengers were unhappy with those procedures， the overwhelming majority were quite satisfied with them; thus it would appear that a review of the procedures is not important to our goal of maintaining or increasing the number of Avia’s passengers.”

40. Avia航空的部门备忘录：

平均地，去年乘坐Avia的1000个乘客中有9个针对我们的行李处理流程写了投诉信。这说明虽然有大约1%的乘客对这一流程表示不满，乘客的主体对它还是满意的。所以对流程的重新审查对我们要保持和提高Avia的乘客数这一目标不是很重要的。

提供观点：

1去年是这样今年呢以后呢？

2很有可能是乘客对服务不满意却没时间正式申诉

3和别的航空公司比较如何seriousness trivialize

1， 没有complaint不代表没有不满。

2， 没有跟其他公司对比，同时并不知道总数。

30. Fun Toy Company采取了一个职工培训计划program，让senior employees volunteer to take an new employees as their apprentice， 这样的话，new employees 就可以follow the pattern sets by the senior employees. 用这种方法， 可以减少培训成本，也不会time-consuming。因此，我们公司也应该仿效该公司，采取同样的方法来培训员工。

考古V1.Afun toys company successfully use the module which that senior employees take on an aprrence，让新员工观察老员工然后从中学习。 这样的话可以减少很多cost for training program。有人建议他们的公司应该学习这个fun toys company.

V2.The cost of training the new employee plays an important role in the overall expense of a company. 象the Fun Toys Company 发起一个Apprentice Training Progam. 他们给senior empoloyee发 salary bounus 如果他们自愿参加这个项目。在这个项目中new employee can learn business patterns from the senior employee这样来降低新员工的培训成本。 so no more expensive and cost programs are needed. 所以我们公司也应该象FUN Toys Company 一样用这中项目降低新员工培训的成本。”

31.是说在公司里面设置well-equipped gym，使得health insurance cost 减少50%的那个。

考古：一个研究说锻炼的人去医院的次数少50％，所以城市要建健身设施，可以减少医疗保险投入50％，减少城市财政赤字。

提供观点：

1. There is no causal relationship between the development of the employees’ health and the provision of a well-equipped gym.

2. Therefore， the reduction of the cost of group health insurance coverage expected by the author is not guaranteed.

3. Even if the provision of the gym can cause a reduction of the cost， no one can rely on it to achieve a balanced town budget since the health incidents occur very randomly.

32：一个制作accounting software的公司，他们制作两种software， 一种为了专业人士，一种为了非专业人士。第一种卖的一直很好，第二种卖的不如他的竞争者的好。一个survey显示，专业人士认为这个公司的软件好，是因为有advanced special feather。由此，得出结论说，如果把这些feather都加进非专业的软件，那么这个软件就会大卖。